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    @goesto11 Feel Free to take your time ^^


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    This isn't a request, I'm just doing a critique which may or may not be harsh.

    I'mma start with the positives... actually to be honest there really aren't many positive things I can say. Some of the color schemes are nice (like with this and this) and the brightness of some of the work is really nice (and when I mean some, I mean this one is really nice), and I admire you keeping up with this GFX thing, something I don't see often outside of GFX focused forums, if there's GFX in a forum at all.

    Starting overall, there's too much lighting around the renders and there's very much a lack of detail beyond lighting and bokeh stocks. Your biggest flaw in your work is lowering the opacity of a render when there's already a render there (this, this, and this) and it makes your work look really messy on top typography that stands out too much (which is basically all of your posted work except for your title banner which gets a pass because the size of the text and word clarity matters more, and even then it has flaws because of the color scheme and lack of detail).

    Basically everything needs a lot of working on: background building, getting the render to mesh well with the background, even your positives don't really stand out much compared to your negatives. Though it would be absolutely rude of me not to give some basic advice:


    • Don't rely on brushes at all for now.
    • Stick to one light source instead of using a lot of bokeh and starry sky stocks.
    • Put more color theory into your work (except maybe complementary colors, I personally hate using complementary colors, but you may not).
    • Stick to using one render, but if you absolutely must use more than one render, keep it close to your main focal since putting it wherever else make your work more messy.
    • Find some tutorials on dA. Some may or may not be useful to you, but there's at least one neat aspect of a tutorial in all of them such as using textures or C4Ds.


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    @Reunilu i see i see.

    personally is not really my style to try make this one well... this one was made because i wanted try something new on my own.

    those i did are actually being made without seeing some tutorial. About the color it may be hard ^^ i like when they have much colour Welp... that is my style. After, each have his own like and own dislike

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    New Work has been made ^_^



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    A little New one has been made :



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    New One has been made ! Altho no Word in it :



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    2 Simple has been Made





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    4 simple has been made :









    Request ? Don't hesitate ! :)


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    A New One has been Made :



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    Making a sig/banner request.

    Emblem:
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    The color would be silver or blue and silver if it's possible

    The girl:
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    Her name is USS Long Island, but I hope that the background is some close to the one she is on now.


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    wow these pictures are so beautiful
    Thank you so much for sharing this



 

 

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